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some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. other believe that they should only allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give tou own opinion.

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Unquestionably, every coin has two sides and so are the
people
.
Society
's
people
 are divided into two groups and
therefore
, the student's choice in their university preferences career has become a topic of debate among the
people
.
This
 essay will compare and contrast both opinions along with my opinion which is in a solid position about
this
 topic and expose it in the conclusion. In the
first
 place, it is very important to take care of the student's likes for their
future
 because the
people
 who support
this
 say that and
agree
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onagree
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 the happiness of the students in the
future
,
secondly
 is a fact the
people
 who study what they love are more successful in their
future
 work, as a consequence their families, friends and social groups share that kind of successful life in all levels. It is evident that exists a contrasting side in
society
 who held another point of view and says that when you study a university career is only for your income development and maybe the program best offer a big deal in the
future
also
 thinks if in the
future
 your degree does not make for you a lot of money will be a missing time and life. To conclude, I would like to say that every
society
 has in part reason, but I believe in freedom and in the possibility to love and heart choice, above, all is a happy life so in the ,end a degree will be the best way to develop a better person and not only think in the income and economic revenue.
However
, It will depend upon the mindset of the
society
 and the thinking evolution of that.
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