Anecdote in a train station or airport when you have gone on a trip, where you were going and what advice you give so that it does not happen.

This
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paper is about my anecdote at the
airport
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in
Thailand
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.
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First
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of
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, I will explain my anecdote at the
airport
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and where
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was going
to
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.
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, I will give
my
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advises
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to avoid
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the same or similar situation. I was at the national
airport
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in
Thailand
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, because
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big countries usually have two airports, the national and international. So, I went to do the
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check-in
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check in
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when the worker told me that my suitcase was too heavy and I should
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pay a lot of money for it.
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, I opened my suitcase and started to put on many clothes
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be the bad less heavy.
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, the worker asked me please to stop because all the people at the
airport
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were watching us and here were ashamed
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the situation.
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, I was going to another place
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the country called Pai, I had been waiting to go to
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place during the trip due to is one of the more beautiful places in
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, and for the
mistake
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with my
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I was closer to
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the flight.
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at the beginning I was a little bit ashamed like
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I continued by reason of I knew that in some airports the workers try to cheat
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European travellers. In conclusion, I loved the trip to
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and I would like to come back again, but my
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to avoid that situation or
similar
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one,
it
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is to read before and among the trip all the information about everything and be very patient, as a lot of people for ignorance pay for many unnecessary things.

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