number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education
This
bar chart shows the number of female students per 100 male students in primary, secondary and tertiary education
. It’s clear from the graph that more boys than girls were enrolled in education
generally. According to
what is shown, primary and secondary school
illustrated similar behaviour. The difference in female students increased significantly in developing Fix the agreement mistake
schools
countries
from 1998 and 1999. The number of female
per 100 male learners Change to a plural noun
females
fall
from 87 and 82 to 83 and 72 in primary and secondary levels respectively for developing Correct subject-verb agreement
falls
countries
. Developed countries
merely showed and any difference for both levels at is was hovering in the top 90s which were near the target. In tertiary education
developing countries
had 75 women compared with 100 men in 1998 which later reduced further
to the least at 66. Developed nations kept the figure above the target in both years at 112 and 105 respectively. To sum up
, we could say that developing nations had more balance in gender distribution in
Change preposition
at
primary
Correct article usage
the primary
education
level while
developed one
had overachieved the target in the tertiary sectorCorrect pronoun usage
ones
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite