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Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #positions #decisions #business #employees #process
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 a great impact
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 an organization. Some people argue that
decision
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 should be taken by those at the upper
level
 alone while others are of the opinion that there should be involvement of the lower
level
 as well. In my opinion, I think there should be collective involvement of
both
 sectors.
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both
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 and provide a logical conclusion.
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one
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 hand, a productive business is based on
both
 the senior and junior employee's
decision
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decisions
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. In an organization, the lower sector
have
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 more communication with the
costumers
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customers
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,where they can easily note their complaints and relay
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them
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 during meetings so they can debate and discuss the solutions
of
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 those problems.
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, a customer of a bank lay a
complain
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 to
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customers
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customer's
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 service about the delay in queues and transactions, the service provider can
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 complaints and the possible solutions which be acted on to the upper
level
 to be sorted out.
Furthermore
, a collective decision of
both
 levels can build a good relationship between them, thereby leading to job satisfaction among the employees.
On the other hand
,decisions
make
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 by only the higher rank can reduce the productivity of the company because
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the decisions taken by them may not be beneficial to the junior employees and can
also
 cause
low
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return
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of
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 customers,thereby leading to bankruptcy. In conclusion,
both
 the upper and lower
level
 of employees are needed for
in
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decisions for the betterment of a business.
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