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In many countries women and men are working full time. It is therefore, logical for women and men to share household works. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As the world is developing rapidly people are getting busier in their daily routines and in many ,countries people are working more than the given hours. As a
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 they have time to do household
work
, and sharing the chores is one of the logical methods to overcome the hassle at the home. I completely agree with the aforementioned statement and the following essay will elaborate on my idea
further
. In the past, according to different norms and,
traditions
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 it was said
women
 had to do the house chores solely without the help of
men
, as
men
 were working full-time and earning for the family. With the development of myriad infrastructures and prices of stocks, petrol etc, is sky rising old routines have changed in peoples
life
, today both
men
 and
women
work
 fulltime. As a consequence of working, household
work
 has to be shared with both parties, and
women
 are unable to do the
work
 by themselves. As an example, my parents used to
work
 24/7 to compete with the living standards, but my grandmother did not
work
, she was a housewife and my granddad used to
work
 for a living.
However
, sharing
work
 at home will able to have a balanced lifestyle in
women
 as well as
men
.
In contrast
, sharing family
work
 will set a good example for children’s
life
.
Eventually
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 they are facing these challenges in
life
 one day, so if parents discuss and
work
 together on housework they will be a role
model
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 in youngsters'
life
. As well as,
women
 and
men
 will have a good mutual understanding of each other. To exemplify, my parents used to do house chores together, and today I am following in their steps.
Therefore
, it is logical that working together brings a positive aspect to children’s
life
. To conclude, I agree that both parties
men
 and
women
 should share the workload to have a balanced lifestyle and be an example to their children’s lives.
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