Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important than saving land for endangered animals.do you agree or disagree with this point of view? Why or why not? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
About using land for human advanced needs, there are two recommendations. One group of people hold
this
point of view that all around the universe including, lands
, air, and water belong to humans and their needs. By contrast
, other groups propose that humans should better consider animals
for using the land. This
essay will argue, why people have to consider animals
to divide the lands
.
It is obvious, using land just for human needs like farming, residence development or industrial activities is not an acceptable idea. The principal reason to endorse that view is, all creatures on the earth are connected in a high level of an ecosystem. Hence
, it needs to be considered each step or decision about this
ecosystem could have different consequences. By way of illustration, humans advanced in amazon jungles to an expansion of agriculture activities caused irreversible damage to animals
’ habitats. Based on recent investigations amazon lands
are not suitable for farming, So when local people deforestation jungles for that aim, not only they could not have any successful crop cultivation, but also
most of these jungle animals
were wiped off. This
type of action led to plenty of inconveniences in the future because the order of the ecosystem is disturbed.
In conclusion, lands
must be divided in an injustice way between human needs and endangered animals
. in my view, animals
are as important as human needs, because they are part of the natural cycle on the earth.Submitted by Arezoo Rahimi
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite