You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, After greeting, I am writing

this

letter to you with regard to

find

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part-time

work

, I am a senior accountant working for

construction

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a construction

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company called IDI, I have been working there for three years. So far, I am one of the oldest staff

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members

memebers

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members

in my company. I have worked for two years before in IV corporation company which has a good reputation in construction businesses.

Therefore

, I have a wide range of experience in accounting

work

, including

wirte

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write

down all

revneues

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revenues

revenue

and

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expenses

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expences

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expenses

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in the proper sheets,

furthermore

prepare

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financial reports.

Although

my income from my current job is quite good, I seek part-time

work

to support my father's home. As I mentioned, I am a professional in my business,

hence

, I would prefer to get

work

in the same field, if you could find a shop or a

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restaurant

restuarant

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restaurant

needs

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that needs

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accountant

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an accountant

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to arrange the financial transactions, it would be better for me.

Nevertheless

, I do not mind

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working

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work

for any place,

moreover

, I could

work

online if it

possible

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is possible

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I am looking forward to

receive

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your update Best Regards Martin Edward

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

188 words

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You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words.

We were asked these three questions: What emerging technologies are stirring up privacy concerns today? What makes those concerns similar or different to those surrounding the printing press, photography, and the computer? Do you think those concerns are valid?

Some argue that music mainly serves as a way for individuals to reduce their stress and anxiety. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.