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Band 6.5

You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, After greeting, I am writing
this
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 letter to you with regard to
find
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 part-time
work
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, I am a senior accountant working for
construction
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a construction
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 company called IDI, I have been working there for three years. So far, I am one of the oldest staff
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members
memebers
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members
 in my company. I have worked for two years before in IV corporation company which has a good reputation in construction businesses.
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, I have a wide range of experience in accounting
work
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, including
wirte
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write
 down all
revneues
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revenues
revenue
 and
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expenses
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expences
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expenses
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 in the proper sheets,
furthermore
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,
prepare
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 financial reports.
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 my income from my current job is quite good, I seek part-time
work
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 to support my father's home. As I mentioned, I am a professional in my business,
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, I would prefer to get
work
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 in the same field, if you could find a shop or a
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restaurant
restuarant
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restaurant
needs
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that needs
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accountant
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an accountant
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 to arrange the financial transactions, it would be better for me.
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, I do not mind
to
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working
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work
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 for any place,
moreover
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, I could
work
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 online if it
possible
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is possible
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 I am looking forward to
receive
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receiving
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 your update Best Regards Martin Edward
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