A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, • explain what you would like to talk about • say why students would be interested in your job • suggest a possible date and time for the talk

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter in response to your ad posted in the times now journal on Wednesday which was related to talking about work experience. I am keenly interested to talk and share my work experience and the struggles faced during my initial journey with the students. As I have started my career as a fresher in the Information technology industry and am a passed-out student of your esteemed university.

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, I will be presenting to MCA students how to choose the best career and how to choose the technology to start a profession as a fresher.

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to that what mistakes should be avoided as a fresher?

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how to find a Job quickly in the IT industry. If you are fine with my Intrest I would be very happy to take the session on Saturdays as I will be busy on weekdays with my office work. Yours Faithfully, Varra Maruthi Reddy.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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