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Many countries spend a lot of money in the arts. Some people think investment in the arts is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public service and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Arts
 has becomes the most scarce existing need in the following days. Many countries spend enormous
money
 on their
arts
 and culture,
,
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 it's become the potential need of every citizen. On the flip
side
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 few individuals thought that it is better to use that
money
 in the progress of society to provide better facilities.
however
, both options will be discussed and the visible solutions will be suggested. On the one side, I thought that
arts
 are a great profession and a lot of people have become the breadwinner for their families, as well as they are the pivotal asset of their government. For ,example every country in the world requires some poignant paintings in offices to represent their culture and customs. That's why
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 every nation should need dapper artists. On the other side, some folks argue that it's a waste of
money
 and government should spend that
money
 to fulfil the requirements of citizens. They said that it's not compulsory to promote
arts
 in the community.
For instance
, the city planner should use that
money
 for infrastructure and facilitate residential in the best way. Putting it all together, I assume that
although
 they are right in some way in
this
 cutting-edge era it's the requirement of every country.
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