Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantages?

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brought major problems into large

cities

. Some argue that these activities ‘locations need to be removed from

cities

and relocated

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suburban and rural districts. I believe that the benefits of

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its probable drawbacks. I will examine the pros and cons in the following paragraphs.

First

and foremost, large businesses are

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of

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and will help drive

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economic growth.

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relocating, more jobs would be made available for the rural population which may

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prevent them from immigrating to large

cities

and would stop overcrowding.

Moreover

, the lands outside of

cities

and towns are less expensive.

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, less budget and funds would be needed

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and those savings could be invested for supplying machinery and equipment. Another positive point can be the low- income of

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, which leads to

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cost of expenditures overall.

Accordingly

, there are many merits

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those who want to start new businesses.

On the other hand

, there are only a few disadvantages.

Firstly

, since the factories are required a large number of workers and labours, moving them into

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countryside, may cause a significant increase in the rate of unemployment.

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, the growth of businesses is slower

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those in large

cities

because of the small customer base and the low cost of living. To sum up, the idea of moving large companies to the countryside is encouraged by some people

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of its potential advantages. As I outlined my point of view above, the positives of

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in rural regions

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surpassed

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its downsides.