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dress code
professional attire
workplace culture
productivity
branding
perception
creativity
equality
bias
discrimination
first impressions
freedom of expression
quality of work
skill set
professionalism
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clientele
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Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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