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The concepts of high-performing electric vehicles, introduced with other
electrical
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vehicles, will carry on
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legacy, albeit with
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and several electric motors. These are just one of the many electric
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of the
next
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generation with battery packs, which Lexus is going to create for the
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decade. Supercar will be facilitated with solid-state batteries, which will provide power reserve for more than seven hundred
kilometers
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LFA is planning to be the
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with
fuel-based
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the fuel-based
a fuel-based

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engine, which will be equipped
four-liter
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engine v8 with doubled turbo in combination with
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system. All these components produce system output in 700 horsepower. 16. Chinese
car
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manufacturer “Greely” presented
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car
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“Greely Vision Starbust”. During the construction of
this
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model
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,
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behind its
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was the space and the birth of a new star. The new philosophy of its
design
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was named “expanding cosmos”, which will be used in
planning
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“Greely’s” future
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for the new digital era. The company has tried to make
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front
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a more visually stunning element:
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grille and air intakes are highlighted by massive LED
strip
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. The
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of
previous
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grilles is totally changed.
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new
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is a decoration made not only with the complex geometrical patterns and interior with soaring console
,
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with full of cosmic rays
stipes
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on geometric selector of transmission. The
front
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door headlight of the dashboard, smoothly
flowing
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one into another, meanwhile creating the sense of limitless space in
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. 17. By 2040,
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will not only be autonomous, but they will
also
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become so alive that we will be able to interact with these
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using voice and touch sensors. To bring
this
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dynamic and at the same time create
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that will not only be autonomous in their functions
,
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be perceived as a living
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, was the priority of the BMW
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. It is planned that the
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will turn into a living being and will work as a companion that strengthens the trust of users. The 2040
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is a philosophy
that is
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likely to become a key aspect
in
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the automotive industry in terms of development. 18. The company Kia seriously focused on
generation
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of the family-type
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, especially during the pandemic period.
This
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is the dream of all lovers of outdoor activities without exception.
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electric off-road vehicle will have one of the newest stunning features in the history of the industry;
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of all, the cabs are able to rotate, and
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panoramic rotation creates great opportunities for both drivers and passengers. Taking into account its futuristic characteristics,
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car
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will have
spacious
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a spacious

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interior and uncredible smart tools, including
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hologram for
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menu and entertainment. 19. Based on
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Ramon
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Barley, who works as
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at Audi,
he
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understood how
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language of Bugatti should be enhanced.
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most
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future
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,
this
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model
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is
also
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planned to be fully electrical. In some ways,
this
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car
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looks more like the “Pagany”
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, especially
at
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the side profile.
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, it has
quite
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with massive wheels and
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contours with futuristic expressiveness. The retractable glass roof, which runs to the back part of
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is particularly impressive.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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  • dress code
  • professional attire
  • workplace culture
  • productivity
  • branding
  • perception
  • creativity
  • equality
  • bias
  • discrimination
  • first impressions
  • freedom of expression
  • quality of work
  • skill set
  • professionalism
  • comfort
  • clientele
  • stakeholders
  • competence
  • formal attire
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