You would like to be work in a different city to be closer to your family. Write a letter to your employer to request a transfer to another office. In the letter: - Explain why you would like to move - Request that your employer place you in a specific city - Request that it be completed by a certain date Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir,
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is Amar Mehta working in the Marketing department as a Senior Sales Officer. I am writing
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letter to request my transfer to the newly opened office in
Ahmedabad
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with, I would like to inform you that
Ahmedabad
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is my home town and my parents stay alone there. Since my father's health is not well and I am the only person to look after him, I have to frequently travel during weekends to
Ahmedabad
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. As our company is planning to open a new office in
Ahmedabad
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and there is a position of Sales Officer, I would request you to place me there.
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I agree,
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will reduce my chance for promotion but at the same time it would help me to support my family and I will be closer to them in their poor health condition. In view of the above, I would urge you to take
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and release my order of transfer by end of
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month.
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, I may plan my current handover activities for my colleague. I am looking forward to a positive response. Your usual cooperation is highly appreciated. Yours faithfully, Amar Mehta,
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