Children from 7-11 now spend more time watching television and playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problem?
Today, younger and younger ones use prolonged periods watching TV and playing video games than in the past. It will affect their academic results, socialising with
parents
and communication with peers. Use synonyms
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essay will discuss these problems and provide possible measures to address them.
There are several issues that a lot of Linking Words
parents
have concerning their child's global development. First of all, many youngsters spend a lot of time watching and playing on media platforms, which will affect their academic appearance and their bonding with relatives. Use synonyms
For instance
, some surveys said that scholars spent many hours on social media platforms. It would cause a huge number of scholars who Linking Words
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trend has had to increase by 30% per year all around the world for decades. Linking Words
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results in many youngsters giving up their learning and not communicating with their Linking Words
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due to
enjoying their virtual world. Linking Words
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, if a horde of Linking Words
children
is only deep in their virtual world daily, they would mitigate socialising with their peers. Use synonyms
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, they could not adapt to society Linking Words
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lacking time to explore.
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, the issues are so serious, there are some possible measures that can be taken. Linking Words
To begin
with, some researchers told us that adults should take the right role to control their Linking Words
children
using electronic equipment as it would affect their global development. So that the Use synonyms
parents
can set up a timetable for their Use synonyms
children
using computers and watching TV for entertainment. Use synonyms
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, adults should limit their sons or daughters' Linking Words
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electronic equipment for many hours and should accompany them to go outside to explore the planet. Wrong verb form
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Therefore
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children
may not be influencing their social skills and academic outcomes.
In a nutshell, following the statements and suggestions above, younger ones use prolonged periods watching TV and playing video games than in the past. Use synonyms
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, if they have good guidance to use, they Linking Words
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have a better life in the future.Wrong verb form
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