"It's clear that gender roles and stereotypes are ingrained in children's lives from a young age, but it's also clear that young people are struggling to fit in with society's expectations of them.'' (Source: childrenssociety.org.uk) Do you think that this will change in the future?

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of society. While some claim that some people think
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roles and stereotypes are fixed in minds of children since childhood, the opposite makes a statement that those elements do not play a significant role in young people’s
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. From my perspective, while the former is valid to some extent, I consider myself an advocate of the latter. Without a shadow of a doubt,
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tasks and ideas held as
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have influenced young people in the past. In
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, these are assigned by parents from
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young age,
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over the
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process, kids kept these ideas in their minds.
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, young girls are always
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to handle family, when they grow up they take
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of trying in
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looking after their
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thing makes
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society unbalanced accidentally and men will not care for their
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while women have fewer prospects in their careers. In my opinion, that thing can be logical in the past but it
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causes many bad consequences. Though forming principles for the immature from
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age has some benefits, it is bad if we consider
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roles và stereotypes will not
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affect
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the
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in the
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. In the
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, things that adults say about
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and conventions may not be true anymore,
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imposing them on
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a teenager
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is an unreasonable thing.
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, young girls in Vietnam are
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that they do not need to learn well and just marry
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a good husband. But the present and the
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show that there are a wealth of women becoming a leader. From my perspective, that thing will be a trend in
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life because no one can force anyone to do anything. In conclusion,
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old lessons and stereotypes in the past may hold true
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these values may no longer be right in the
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, forcing the juvenile to follow society’s opinions is not necessary and will change dramatically.
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