Many countries have now banned smoking in public places. Some people feel that government should ban smoking entirely. Do you agree or disagree?

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The ban on smoking in public spaces in many countries gives rise to the discussion about whether the government should ban smoking entirely.
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, smoking is considered to be a common activity for workers to relieve their stress and improve their focus during the day
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other activities similar to drinking coffee. The only key difference between smoking and drinking coffee is that the byproduct of smoking, which is smoke, may harm other members and
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the reason why many countries prohibit smoking in public. As long as the smoke can be contained or regulated,
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smoking should be within the acceptable scope of activities that citizens should be permitted to do. The cons of smoking,
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, should be clearly communicated to support the informed decision of individuals.
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, smoking has been considered a cultural heritage in some areas or jurisdictions.
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, many tribes in Northern Thailand considered smoking to be a cultural bonding activity between families and friends.
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activity is in no way harmful to society and there is no reason that the government should destroy other cultural heritage without reasonable justification. In conclusion, I believe the existing control which is controlling smoking in public already serves the government's role to improve the health of the public. Stepping
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than that may be considered an intrusion into the freedom of the people and we may suffer the loss of heritage by the blind decision of the authority if
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a decision actually happens.
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