People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In today's modern world,

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credit

card

becomes

main

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the main

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way to

purchase

the

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goods and

this

method

makes more comfortable the shopping in megacentres. There

a

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couple of benefits of using the

credit

card

method

which

outweigh

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the disadvantages of

this

system

.

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essay will elaborate

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positive sides of

this

method

of

purchase

. In the

first

place, the

credit

card

system

can demonstrate the person's expenses during a month.

This

system

also

show

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the date, shop's name, goods' name and amount of

money

of

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for

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all

purchase

from

first

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to

last

one.

Moreover

,

this

system

can

provides

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the

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table

where

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illustrates the spheres of buying which might help the person decreases the

monthes'

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months

expenses.

For instance

, most

of

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Kazakh

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kazakh

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people

use

Kaspi

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the Kaspi

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credit

card

system

which has

friendly

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a friendly

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and understandable design for common

people

. What is more, it is undeniable that

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credit

card

has

shares

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shared

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for users and

this

payment

method

makes safe

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money

more

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safer.

In addition

, after some

purchases

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the shares might bring a multitude of bonuses on the

credit

card

which

people

can spend on their needs.

For example

, many companies like Halyk bank and Kaspi give bonuses to

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the user

a user

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user

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users

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for using the

credit

card

of

this bank

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these banks

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.

Moreover

, today's

credit

card

can be

more

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safer than

the

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real

money

due to the fact that the stolen

credit

card

does not give

opportunity

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the opportunity

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to still much

money

because of the password. In conclusion,

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credit

cards play

crucial

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role in each person's daily life around the world. Most

of

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apply

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the

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people

use

credit

cards due to the fact that

this

method

of payment

provdies

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provides

provided

the

safness

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safeness

sadness

of

money

and it is

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the comfortablest

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comfortablest

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most comfortable

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way of

purchase

and that has many various shares for

people

.