Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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passage argues about accepting bad karma as they are and

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on with it, or like some say

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to improve yourself

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and get over it.

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, accepting

life

as is, can give you peace with what you have,

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surging towards hurdles and developing

life

can make you feel proud of yourself. Most people say that

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accepting

life

with its

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shortcomings

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short comings

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can leave you content with what you already had

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means that you have accepted that developing yourself is like punching above your weight limit, which leaves them right where they are

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doesn’t have to be wrong by no means, but it just leaves you with a room of probabilities of your potential.

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, in every

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there will be a lot of potential players who can build a career of their own, but they

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with nothing solely because of their lack of commitment. While others say that, after accepting

life

is hard you have to tackle one of them, and resolve one at a time, to plummet your

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short comings

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to help you lead a better

life

and in the long

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this

helps you to progress in your

life

and not only you feel satisfied with the achievements you have done, but

also

feel a lot more confident by your self and you can tackle and

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that

life

throws at you.

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character can help you boost your

life

in general.

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, all the successful people had confidence in them, all of them say the same line, stay in your lane, and do your job. In conclusion, both a bad

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with

bad

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a bad

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situation like either unemployed

shortage

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or shortage

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of money and

improving

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from

such

situations, each had

it’s

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its

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own perks

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, people who feel content relax with

there

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life

and don’t stress much, and few

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to

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situations and develop themselves from it.