Some cities ban private cars from entering the centres and force people to use bicycles and buses. Do advantages of this police outweigh the disadvantages.

In a few nations,
government’s
Change noun form
government
show examples
policy rules have  prohibited entering the middle of
urban
Add an article
an urban
show examples
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
show examples
by personal automobiles. And they are demanding to utilize
from
Change preposition
apply
show examples
public transportation like buses or bicycles. In my opinion, using public transportation may be  
way
Add an article
a way
the way
show examples
more preferable choice for both  individuals and
environment
Correct article usage
the environment
show examples
.
This
essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of strict regulation of policemen related
using
Change preposition
to using
show examples
buses and bikes and provide a logical conclusion. The two main advantages of forbidding personal cars to drive in downtown areas are government
are manage
Change the verb form
manages
show examples
to increase
level
Add an article
the level
show examples
of safety of
humans
and can reduce the
amount
Change the quantifier
number
show examples
of  environmental problems by using bicycles or
another public cars
Replace the adjective
another public car
other public cars
show examples
.
Firstly
, if people reduce their using amount of private cars in the middle of cities, it would be good to decrease the risk of accidents between
humans
and automobiles.
Secondly
, police officers'
pressuring
Replace the word
pressure
show examples
to use public transport can be
good
Add an article
a good
show examples
solution to resolve the environmental issues which mankind
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
show examples
suffering in today’s world like air pollution or contamination.
However
, there
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
also
some negative
side
Fix the agreement mistake
sides
show examples
of using only public
transports
Fix the agreement mistake
transport
show examples
in some
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
show examples
like
rush
Correct article usage
the rush
show examples
hours of
humans
and they might be without freedom from using only
bicycle
Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
show examples
and buses. Particularly at the present time, there are more and more people who have
myriad
Change the article
a myriad
the myriad
show examples
number of tasks and they are busy with these things all time.
Therefore
, they need to complete all of them on time and far more
accurate
Change the word
accurately
show examples
. And
also
, people would be without
any
Correct quantifier usage
apply
show examples
much more freedom if police
officer
Fix the agreement mistake
officers
show examples
force them to use only public transportation.
This
way, cause some serious problems with their thinking and it
lead
Change the verb form
leads
show examples
to hard pain
on
Change preposition
in
show examples
their brain
as a result
of less sense of fulfilment  from independence. To conclude,  
although
disadvantages of policemen’s putting some kind of rules related to using only public automobiles,
but
Remove the conjunction
apply
show examples
it has an extremely positive impact not only
for
Change preposition
on
show examples
humans
safety but
also
it can help to reduce air pollution
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
cities.
Submitted by Premium Version on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: