Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

• In our modern life, transportation has been proven to be a revolution in almost every day type of cities and few towns prohibit personal automobiles from

come

Change the verb form

coming

show examples

in downtown and from my point of view,

people

should

be utilize

Change the verb form

utilize

show examples

a

bike

and public

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

like buses to move within the urban. In

this

essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of using

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

bike

and buses to go

to

Change preposition

apply

show examples

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

somewhere. • There are a number of significant benefits of

utilize

Wrong verb form

utilising

show examples

a public vehicle and motorcycle

instead

of

own

Wrong verb form

owning

show examples

automobile

Correct article usage

an automobile

show examples

.

First

of all the government emphasize, if

people

use

bike

or buses

instead

of their own automobile, it will be extremely beneficial for

environment

Add an article

the environment

show examples

especially for increasing air pollution.

Therefore

in some large

areas

Add a comma

,areas

show examples

the administration forbid

for

Change preposition

apply

show examples

individuals to

use

their own

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

and

furthermore

, it helps to increase

a traffic jams

Correct the article-noun agreement

traffic jams

a traffic jam

show examples

on the road.

For example

, if taking Singapore,

people

can not afford to buy

cars

in there because

cars

are exceedingly high-priced, and only billionaires purchase

automobile

Fix the agreement mistake

automobiles

show examples

there, and car rental fees are too expensive, so

people

can not afford

it

Correct pronoun usage

them

show examples

.

Correct your spelling

Therefore

Therfore

Correct your spelling

Therefore

individuals

use

the

bike

and public

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

. • Turing to the other side of the argument despite its benefits it

also

has downsides

firstly

the price of

cars

is cheap in the country and everyone has their own car,

then

there will be many traffic jams in the country due to the lack of

cars

, and now the main accidents are caused by

cars

, which leads to the death or disability of many

people

.

For example

, according to statistics, the number of

people

who die or are injured in car accidents every year in the world exceeds two million.

In addition

, the increase in

cars

pollutes the air, because

cars

emit a lot of toxic gases, and bicycles are

also

free of charge and do not pollute the air. • In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned

up

Change preposition

apply

show examples

and I can come to

a

Correct article usage

the

show examples

conclusion that if there are more

cars

in the country it will cause a lot of problems and I think,

people

should

use

wheeliecycle

Correct your spelling

wheel cycle

or public transport to reduce traffic jams so that

people

can live a good life.