Some cities ban private cars from entering the center and force people to use bicycle and buses. Do the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.
• In our modern life, transportation has been proven to be a revolution in almost every day type of cities and few towns prohibit personal automobiles from
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in downtown and from my point of view, Change the verb form
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people
should be utilize
a Change the verb form
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bike
and public transports
like buses to move within the urban. In Fix the agreement mistake
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this
essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of using the
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bike
and buses to go to
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somewhere.
• There are a number of significant benefits of Correct article usage
apply
utilize
a public vehicle and motorcycle Wrong verb form
utilising
instead
of own
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owning
automobile
. Correct article usage
an automobile
First
of all the government emphasize, if people
use
bike
or buses instead
of their own automobile, it will be extremely beneficial for environment
especially for increasing air pollution. Add an article
the environment
Therefore
in some large areas
the administration forbid Add a comma
,areas
for
individuals to Change preposition
apply
use
their own transports
and Fix the agreement mistake
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furthermore
, it helps to increase a traffic jams
on the road. Correct the article-noun agreement
traffic jams
a traffic jam
For example
, if taking Singapore, people
can not afford to buy cars
in there because cars
are exceedingly high-priced, and only billionaires purchase automobile
there, and car rental fees are too expensive, so Fix the agreement mistake
automobiles
people
can not afford it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
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Therefore
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individuals Correct your spelling
Therefore
use
the bike
and public transports
.
• Turing to the other side of the argument despite its benefits it Fix the agreement mistake
transport
also
has downsides firstly
the price of cars
is cheap in the country and everyone has their own car, then
there will be many traffic jams in the country due to the lack of cars
, and now the main accidents are caused by cars
, which leads to the death or disability of many people
. For example
, according to statistics, the number of people
who die or are injured in car accidents every year in the world exceeds two million. In addition
, the increase in cars
pollutes the air, because cars
emit a lot of toxic gases, and bicycles are also
free of charge and do not pollute the air.
• In conclusion, having weighed everything mentioned up
and I can come to Change preposition
apply
a
conclusion that if there are more Correct article usage
the
cars
in the country it will cause a lot of problems and I think, people
should use
wheeliecycle
or public transport to reduce traffic jams so that Correct your spelling
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people
can live a good life.Submitted by Premium Version on
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