You are about to move out of your apartment in an English-speaking country. Your landlord helped you a lot during your stay and you have a friend who would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter let your landlord know that you will be leaving thank your landlord for his / her help tell him/her about your friend

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Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I will be leaving the apartment on days ahead.For

this

reason,I want to finish my rental contract. As I mentioned above,I have intended to move to another residence

hence

I would like to stop my rental duration from

month.I just want to make you aware of my plan beforehand. I am unable to thank you enough for your support and attention.

This

is simply because you helped me a lot when I was in trouble with regard to renting a house.

Moreover

,your patience behaviour was remarkable,when I had hardship paying a rental price. I would

also

point out that one of my closest friends is interested in renting

this

flat straight out I leave.He is a relevant person according to his character and personality.

Furthermore

,he is about to be accepted to the university which is located within walking distance of

this

accommodation. On behalf of my family members,I would like to thank you for your help. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Fri Nov 25 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

167 words

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