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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee ans bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European counties. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffee ans bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European counties. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables display information about how many Fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
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 were sold in five different countries during a five-year period.
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UK
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 and Switzerland were at the top of the list,
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 Sweden and
Belgium
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 were at the least the top. The first table illustrates sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee. A large number of coffees were sold in the
UK
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 in 2004,
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 in 1999
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UK
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the UK
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 sold 1.5 million euros. In 1999, most coffees were sold in Denmark. The least number of coffees was sold by Sweden. The second table shows sales of
bananas
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 over 5 years. Switzerland has sold the most
bananas
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 of all time,
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Belgium
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 has sold the least amount.
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, Switzerland sold three times more than before and 57 million were released in 2004. Sales of Fairtrade-labelled
bananas
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 rapidly increased in the
UK
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,
Belgium
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, and Sweden.
UK
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 and
Belgium
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 have sold for just under 4 million euros more than 5 years ago.
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