Some people think that all university students sould study whatever they like. Others believe that they shoyld only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Nowadays, education plays a major role in our lives. a large number of people think that
university
students
should study
only subjects
that will be useful in their professions, while others believe that pupils can study
everything that they want. This
essay will discuss both views and explain my opinion. In my opinion, university
students
should be allowed to study
their professional subjects
.
Firstly
, university
students
need to study
hard to get jobs and a high salaries
. Correct the article-noun agreement
high salaries
a high salary
Hence
, it is obvious why many children choose to be scientists or technologists because this
subject will insure them a
high salaries and workplaces everywhere. There are some reasons why pupils should learn only the main skills that will be useful in their future job. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Secondly
, if a pupil studies hard and know
everything about his profession, he will be a qualified specialist and get a great full-time job. Change the verb form
knows
For example
, my dad used to read every book about engineering and he got some information technology courses for his job, now he is a highly skilled civil engineer. In addition
, more than three companies proposed full-time work to him. Nevertheless
, my dad does not know about some new jobs and sometimes he categorically does not believe that humanities subjects
are equivalently noticeable.
On the other hand
, pupils would be less stressed if they study
whatever they like. Joyful people may be more creative and productive. Furthermore
, if a university
student studies something extra, they may be versatile and this
knowledge can be handy in the future. For instance
, IT was chosen and learned by my friend, but she read a lot of books about design and architecture. However
, now she is a highly skilled designer.
In conclusion, I believe that university
students
need to learn their main subjects
more than an additional one. In majority
of people who learn their profession and know how to work will be more demand.Add an article
the majority
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