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Some studies suggest that children spend more time watching Tv than they did in the past and spend less on doing active and creative things. Why do you think this is happening? what method and measure can be used to solve the issues?

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Several studies offered that children spend most of
the
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time
 watching
TV
 rather than they did in the past and spend less on doing
active
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 and
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 things. I think
that
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 on
an
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interest. I can say that many methods can be used to solve the matters. It is often seen, unlike before these
days
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 parents are extremely busy
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their
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 work they tend to engross a minor in front of
TV
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the TV
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 by themselves.
This
 is because it becomes easier to keep an eye on them if they are in one place.
Furthermore
, it is life savers for them to complete
the
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 roles and responsibilities.
For example
, according to a survey conducted by
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Child Welfare, on average, 89% of mothers use the technique so that job is finished on
time
 and without
efforts
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.
Therefore
,
initially
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 they make them habitually and later
regret
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.
Nevertheless
, to alleviate the issue the key is
usage
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 of parental control of
TV
this
 will help an adolescent to be disciplined and
also
 controls the watch on it.
Secondly
, they should encourage them to play more games like
scavenger
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hunt
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 or engage in extra curriculum activities like
craft
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 or drawing
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proliferating the adolescent mind.
Moreover
,
also
 help them to be fit mentally and physically and reduces the
time
 spent in front of the television set.
For instance
, a recent article cited by the Times of India, says 75% of the children
spend
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time
 on practical skills
are
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profoundly have a creative mind compare to a child who watches more of the idiot box. To conclude, due to their hectic schedule parents forgets
TV
 has
adverse
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 effect on
toddler
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a toddler
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.
However
, to mitigate
this
,
control
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 them is needed and occupying the kid towards
the
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practical activities should be encouraged more.
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