Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter give the details of your train trip describe the luggage you left on the train say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to the baggage that I have lost. I would like to let you know that my train destination was from Paris to Berlin.I travelled in the business class sector.Unfortunately,I forgot to take my luggage when I left the wagon. The baggage I lost is easily noticeable because it is enormous.To give

further

information,there is a company logo in front of the luggage and the name of the logo is CISI.With the exception of all of them, the colour is dark blue.I hope the whole clues will help you to find it sooner. I would be extremely grateful if you could inform me as you find it.

Furthermore

,if it is possible please send it to my address because recently I have been overburdened by my manager,

therefore

,I do not have spare time to take it from anywhere. I hope you will address

this

issue as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

Submitted by malikli.malik1995 on Sun Nov 27 2022

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