Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

People

hold conflicting views about whether the

violence

from programmes on

television

or

computer

games

can lead to detrimental impacts on

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social

life

.

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my opinion,

i

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agree that

these factor

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these factors

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will not

do

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harm

to

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the whole

society

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. On the one hand, there are several reasons why

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society is

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affected

afected

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affected

by the

violence

on

television

and

computer

games

.

First

of all,

people

, especially the youth,

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frequently follows what happens on

television

's screen or

video

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in video

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game acting.

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trend can affect badly

to

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users,

such

as

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the reality of real

life

and

behave

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unusually .

Also

, they even rust their moral principles and

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characteristics

characterics

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characteristics

.

Moreover

,

people

spend most of their free time either watching

television

or playing

computer

games

, which results in

the

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shortage of time management for working or studying.

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, students will be

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from

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these factors and neglect their

study

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studies

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and in the end, they may get bad marks and even drop out of

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school

schoo

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school

On the other hand

, I

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presume

pesume

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presume

that

this

situation will be much more beneficial for

people

.

Firstly

,

people

can widen their knowledge from these factors.I

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that If

people

are exposed to

such

violent actions , they might learn from them,

such

as gaining awareness and having their own protective methods. In

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, some

people

; who

are not regularly watch

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do not regularly watch

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violent actions and

Games

, may find difficulty in dealing with

violence

in real

life

.

Secondly

, the

violence

from

television

and

Computer

Games

are reliable to improve and enhance

people

's development in the way to encounter.

This

is because these

channel

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channels

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and

Games

are investigated seriously and published officially.As a consequence,

people

can feel comfortable and consider these things as valuable lessons in

life

. In conclusion,

while

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many

people

presume that

violence

from

television

and

Games

are hazardous

threatens

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.I believe that these violent actions will be much more positive for the whole

society

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.