In many countries, tourism is a major part of the economy, but it also causes environmental damage and ruins the places it exploits. It is argued that tourists should pay an additional tax to compensate for this damage. Do you agree?

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In the past two
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there has been an explosion in the number of people who are able to travel to places of interest and beauty. One of the results of
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has been that the locations these
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visit have been spoiled and even destroyed. I am partially in agreement with the view that
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should pay a charge to repair the damage they bring about but feel that those responsible for looking after tourist attractions should
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play their part in caring for them. I support the practice of requiring
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to help those who are responsible for maintaining tourist attractions with a monetary payment. When a town,
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or place of beauty receives thousands of
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every year the cost of,
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, cleaning, disposal of rubbish, an increased number of staff and provision of services can be high, which places a strain on budgets.
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is largely because the income
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at the disposal of, say, a town’s management is limited to what is made available from the taxes citizens pay. Venice charges all
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an entrance fee to the
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, which mitigates to some extent the impact of its millions of
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annually, but has so far failed to fully protect
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city
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from those who come to enjoy it.
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is a good example of why other strategies need to be adopted. More can be done than just collecting fees from
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. For any tourist destination to continue to be viable, not only for
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but
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for those who live there or nearby, there must be a clear policy set and funded by
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government in consultation with town or
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councils as to how
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rapidly increasing influx of
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is going to be managed. In Germany,
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, Berlin had the backing of the national government to control the letting of apartments through Airbnb so that owners of property in the
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were only permitted to let out
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apartments within their homes rather than their whole house.
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had two positive effects: the price of accommodation for Berliners was kept at an affordable level and
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to the
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had the experience of living with a local. In conclusion, the growing
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of
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travelling the world is producing problems to which there are no easy answers. One welcome strategy has been to charge
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a visitor fee, but I believe closer cooperation between
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government and those who are responsible for managing matters on the ground would prove productive.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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