Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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contents

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would trigger several detrimental effects

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our society,

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are adamant that it does not bring any remarkable influence. While many rationales are given behind

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proposal, I suppose that

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have

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own merits and demerits and I would like to

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my essay.

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primary reason which makes

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people

conclude like the

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statement is that these kinds of films or

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can create some enthusiasm feeling making

people

easily get addicted, which prevents them from performing well

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their study or work and later ruin their future as a consequence .

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unhealthy activities, it would spell out

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many troubles. One of the problems is that they would think what the characters did is cool and start to imitate them, which greatly

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their lifestyle after.

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,

people

who stand for the other side

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have their own justification. Apparently,

people

who

are legally watch

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these kinds of content must

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of

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physical

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and

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it is challenging to link them to the illicit

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that flow from virtual life into the actual world. The majority of

people

in

this

age group only watch

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for enjoyment after successfully fleeing from

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or studies, or simply out of curiosity. The fact that individuals often behave according to their motivations rather than in response to

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movie or video game sequences is another important consideration.

People

with a good or enough educational background would already know what to do and what not to do, and those who are the opposite would maintain their initial goals.

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everything into consideration, even if

both

sides have their advantages, I think that the violence depicted on television or in video

games

won't have a significant impact on the future generation. Their living situation and parents had the most impact on them. Without watching violent movies or playing violent video

games

, they are likely to develop like

such

if they live with an aggressive couple and several misbehaving children.