some people like to try new things, for example , places to visit and types of food. other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.

Some individuals interested in trying new experiences ,
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an
illustration
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eat different
food
and visiting new places. While some humans prefer to continue doing
things
like before. In
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both sides of
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will be analyzed before a logical conclusion will be provided.
First
of all,I believe that it depends on
people
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personality
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personalities
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. It means if humans have active and risky
character
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, they prefer to try new
things
.
Such
as
,
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different
kind
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of
food
from other countries and visiting new places. In terms of psychology,
people
that enjoy
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new
things
, are more successful than others
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in their life and communication.
In addition
, they are very sociable and they make friends very easily. On other hand, some humans are not interested in trying modern
things
. There is a view that some
people
who
they
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are not active, desire do
things
constantly and continuously. Due to their personality, they have limited
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friends
and communications and it leads to
repeatativy
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repetitive
life. In some same cases,
people
believe that they waste their money and time by
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new
food
in a new restaurant because they may
do
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not like
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the favor
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favor
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of
food
. Sociologists believe stingy
people
usually are not
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interested
intersted
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interested
in doing new
things
. In sum
up
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,
although
trying new
things
are too risky, its advantages will
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out
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weigh
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Novelty
  • Routine
  • Comfort zone
  • Risk-taker
  • Risk-averse
  • Enrichment
  • Personal growth
  • Innovation
  • Creativity
  • Stability
  • Tradition
  • Habit
  • Familiarity
  • Personal enrichment
  • Life stages
  • Fulfilling
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