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  • detrimental
  • sedentary behavior
  • obesity
  • hinder
  • cognitive skills
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making
  • spatial awareness
  • engaging learning environment
  • motivates
  • foster
  • teamwork
  • collaborate
  • mitigating potential risks
  • parental guidance
  • physically interactive
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