you have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. you dont fully agree with this opinion. write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. in your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.

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dear sir,

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am writing to you because

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like to give you my opinion about an article that you have just published in a national newspaper.

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of all,

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some points

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agree with you,

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are round.

city

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centres usually have ancient architecture and old buildings,

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bazar

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bazaar

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is build

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about 100 years ago, numerous important buildings,

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embassy

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city

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council

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council

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ethnic restaurant has been seen , as an illustration, polluted air is seen strongly. due tomy

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is capital of

iran

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Iran

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, a large population live in it. so, my

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center is

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center is

centres

too

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crowded

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crowded

unfortunately.

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like to suggest you reserve a tour which

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you can

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internet

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to visit my

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

127 words

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