More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays an increasing number of
people
start to
work
remotely from their homes
instead
of at their
workplace
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. One type of
people
tend
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to consider
this
idea positively, thinking it will be rather beneficial for employees and their families, while the other
supposes
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there will be more stress. In my opinion, I would agree that working at
home
is more
advantageable
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for workers as well as their close
people
.
However
,
this
essay is aimed to discuss both and black out the
first
.
First
, remote working means that there will be
less
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traffic and
time
issues. If employees worked online at
home
, they would not need to get up very early in order to avoid traffic jams and not be late, saving more
time
for sleep or doing some other
home
business.
In addition
, workers will spend more
time
with their families, not losing it on getting to
work
in the morning and coming back
to
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home
in the evening.
For instance
, there is a popular Youtube channel whose author is a Microsoft IT employee
and
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who does all
work
without getting out of his flat, managing to cultivate his media hobby of giving useful IT tips.
On the other hand
, not attending the workplace outside might lead
people
who are inexperienced in using new technologies to get overloaded and much stress.
For example
, when it was the quarantine
time
of online studying in 2020 in Kazakhstan, plenty of older teachers had to struggle in order
to begin
grasping some basic things
of
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computers
such
as downloading and opening apps. In summary, despite the mammoth drawback for the old
such
as dealing with too much stress, it would be definitely better for young and modern workers who are actively developing
in
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the newest technologies to complete their
work
at
home
.
Thus
, they could save a lot of
time
, spending it along with their own families, not leaving the
home
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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