Your next-door neighbor like to listen to music late of night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager.

Dear
Mr.
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Bunyod I think I need to write to
manager
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the manager
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. Because of my
neighbor's
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building mistake which is my
next door
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neighbor
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like to listen to
loudly
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music,
during
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nighttime.
As a result
, I lose my sleep. I would like to write about my
neighbor's
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mistake. My
neighbor
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has been living in there
since
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2 months.
This
new man is interested in listening to music. It
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really
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eally
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really
loudly
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after midnight and has made a lot of trouble for me to fall asleep. I'm suffering from it. I mostly wake up at six every morning.
In
addition
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it has
a negative effects
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to
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my study. So, I ask you people are not allowed to make noise after 10 pm. I suppose that he does not about
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these laws. I would be grateful if you prevent
this
problem. I look forward to hearing your kind reply. Yours sincerely,
Adolat
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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