Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the world today. In the not too distant future, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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technology era we are living, it is predicted that

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teachers will be substituted by

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computers.

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will explain my

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Firstly

,

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used in modern classes, cannot replace the

teacher

, which not only provides relevant knowledge but

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have the sensitive tough of a human, compared with the cold

internet

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moreover

, the

teacher

knows the strongest and weakest points of the students,

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can provide offer the relevant help, as to achieve his/her goals and accomplish the tasks.

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,the knowledge that the

teacher

provides, is relevant and correct, compared to the

internet

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if it is considered the mother of

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knowledge, there everyone can freely write articles, which can mislead the learner.

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a friend of mine,

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her thesis, by obtaining information and dates from the

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, later realizing that were totally incorrect details. To recapitulate,

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is believed to be a necessity,

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still believe that the

teacher

plays a crucial role in the student's

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