Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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smoking is not allowed, especially in the
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police of some
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smoking in central areas is interdicted too and I agree with that
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because it is one of the greatest
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to control
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health
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and make humans healthy.
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we are living in
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world where is almost everyone
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some problems with their health condition, especially
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disease, which means the main reason of course smoking.
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are
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number of companies where
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banned, because by
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using
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way, company managers are able to balance employers and increase the quality of work.
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other
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side smoking
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buildings is not allowed, because of
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workers and company materials too. All people are different, which means not everybody is careful and
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, if somebody will smoke in hidden places
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as in WC or in own room, after doing that he or she might forget about his or her still burning
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Figaro
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always throw it without putting out it and
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little mistake can reduce a huge amount of problems. If the fire will start almost everything will burn, including essential materials and of
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all
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will be in danger. So
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smoking is banned in
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business
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business
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the policy of
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, smoking is not allowed, especially in centres. Smoking in crowded areas might be
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damage
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individuals
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, in Japan especially in central parks or in
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people do not smoke, because
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fines are too high and not everybody is not able to pay them
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people avoid
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kind of bad habit there. In
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, individuals should control
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and give up smoking, whenever if they
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do not, even
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government
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government

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government
or the biggest
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companies
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companies
are not able to save their health. ,

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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