Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

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number of
companies
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smoking is not allowed, especially in the
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.
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the
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police of some
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counties
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countries
smoking in central areas is interdicted too and I agree with that
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because it is one of the greatest
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to control
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health
condition
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and make humans healthy.
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we are living in
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world where is almost everyone
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has
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has
some problems with their health condition, especially
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disease, which means the main reason of course smoking.
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are
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the
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number of companies where
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is
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is
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banned, because by
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using
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way, company managers are able to balance employers and increase the quality of work.
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other
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side smoking
in
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into
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buildings is not allowed, because of
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workers and company materials too. All people are different, which means not everybody is careful and
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responsible
responsable
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responsible
with
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themselves
themselws
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themselves
.
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, if somebody will smoke in hidden places
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the building,
such
as in WC or in own room, after doing that he or she might forget about his or her still burning
sigaro
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Figaro
sugar
,
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and they
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always throw it without putting out it and
this
little mistake can reduce a huge amount of problems. If the fire will start almost everything will burn, including essential materials and of
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all
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employees
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employes
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employees
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will be in danger. So
that
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smoking is banned in
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business
bissines
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business
companies.
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the policy of
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countries
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countries
, smoking is not allowed, especially in centres. Smoking in crowded areas might be
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a big
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damage
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damage
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individuals
in
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there.
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, in Japan especially in central parks or in
stereets
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streets
people do not smoke, because
of
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fines are too high and not everybody is not able to pay them
,
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so
that
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people avoid
from
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this
kind of bad habit there. In
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conclusion
conclution
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conclusion
, individuals should control
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themselves
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themselves
and give up smoking, whenever if they
they
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do not, even
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government
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the goverment
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goverment
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government
or the biggest
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companies
companyes
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companies
are not able to save their health. ,
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