Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

•In our modern life, the majority of

business

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forbid

to

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smoking

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smoke

for humans

in

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anywhere

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in

the

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communal offices

whom

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work in some kind of

companies

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. Few

government

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governments

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try to

banning

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smoke

in all public offices and

companies

. From my point of view, the

government

should

banning

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smoke

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anywhere for everybody, because smoking is

extremely

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terrible habit.

This

essay agrees that, if the administration

forbid

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smoke

it

really

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beneficial for

company

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the company

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. •On the one hand, if the administration allows

for

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employees and clients to

smoke

in public spots it

very

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harmful

for

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workers

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health and no

company

wants its employee to enter the

company

smoking or drinking alcohol because they do not work very well and

as a result

, the

companies

budget can suffer greatly. So the

government

allows

for

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adolescents to

smoke

everywhere.

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in my country, the

government

do not allow them especially work in some

companies

, because our

country

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budget is really depending on the performance of campaign workers. So the state prohibits smoking. •

On the other hand

, smoking is very harmful to

people

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health. If young

people

smoke

cigarettes or use tobacco products,

first

of all, it harms for

mentality

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of

people

and

it

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damages

people

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lungs. So he needs to know

who

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he is taking to his office as a worker and if

people

smoke

cigarettes incessantly, they cannot imagine their life without them. •In conclusion,

some

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countries the

government

forbid

for

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their citizens

smoke

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to smoke

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in

the

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public places

especially

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for

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company

workers and I think it is one of the greatest

way

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to the development of the

company

situation and even the country.