Some business prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

believe that smoking is very harmful that's why several

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forbid smoking and some executives have prohibited smoking in all popular

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.In my opinion,smoking must

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in all

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.

Firstly

,

this

essay agrees that smoking

banned

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is very good for

countries

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environment and

secondly

,smoking banned is beneficial for

people

's health. On the one hand,there is a

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of

beneficial

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of smoking forbid.For

this

reason,it helps

being

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a good

environmental

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because all

place

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will be clean and pure through make

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illegal

illegaled

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illegal

of smoking.A prime example,according to the data,

smoking

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caused to produce various

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toxins

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toxics

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for nature

and

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moreover

,according to

the

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scientists,China is prohibited smoking that's why

it's

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nature is very beautiful and very pure.

On the other hand

,smoking banned everywhere isn't negative

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because it has created

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effect

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for

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individuals

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health.From my way of thinking, it causes many diseases.

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is a glaring example,according to the study,these days smoking causes many

people

's death and for

this

reason,according to the data,60%

individuals

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perished

and

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nowadays many young

people

begin smoking very early and that's why they

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being

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a

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sick from a young age. In conclusion,many provinces stopped smoking in all public places and several

occupation

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prohibited it ,

thus

many governments created a new rule

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because smoking causes many problems.From my point of view,

this

law is very beneficial for all countries being beautiful and their citizen's health will be good and by

this

means all kinds of conditions are prevented everywhere.