employers some times ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. some people say that this information may be relevent and useful. others disagree. discuss about these views and give your own opinion.
Personal
information
about job applicants, Use synonyms
such
as hobbies, interests and whether they are married or single, is sometimes asked by employers. While some people say that Linking Words
this
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information
is relevant and useful, others, including me, do not.
On the one hand, knowing about Use synonyms
personal
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the personal
information
of employees helps employers understand their workers more. Use synonyms
In other words
, if you know individual Linking Words
information
about your workers, you will know Use synonyms
about
what they need and create a suitable Change preposition
apply
work
environment, Use synonyms
therefore
, keeping them in the Linking Words
company
. Use synonyms
For example
, in a Linking Words
company
that has many young employees who like parties and chatting, the Use synonyms
company
can organize parties after long stressful projects. Use synonyms
This
helps staff relax and refill their energy battery to get back to Linking Words
work
; in Use synonyms
the
party time, everyone in the Correct article usage
apply
company
Use synonyms
have
time to commute and Change the verb form
has
more
understand each other so Correct quantifier usage
apply
that
makes working together more productive.
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which
On the other hand
, most employers just ask for Linking Words
employee's
personal Fix the agreement mistake
employees'
information
because it is a general form and they do not really care about them. In fact, most companies in Vietnam when Use synonyms
employing
, Replace the word
employees
it
always has Correct pronoun usage
apply
entry
about Add an article
an entry
employee's
hobbies; I used to Fix the agreement mistake
employees'
work
in Use synonyms
recruitment
department and I do not understand why having Correct article usage
the recruitment
this
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,
because we never use Remove the comma
apply
this
entry during Linking Words
work
time in the Use synonyms
company
of employees. In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
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information
is quite unuseful for both recruit and employee's Use synonyms
work
processing. Almost just large and huge companies are enough abilities to care about worker's Use synonyms
interest
and meet that demand.
In conclusion, Fix the agreement mistake
interests
although
personal Linking Words
information
has Use synonyms
some
certain advantages, it seems to me that Correct quantifier usage
apply
this
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information
is pretty unuseful and hard to apply.Use synonyms
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