These days, more and more people are going to other countries for couple of years, either to find job or to study. These are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also face some difficulties.

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countries for work or to get graduate over there and it is one of the most
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students to go overseas
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given exam of IELTS (INTERNATIONAL ENGLISH LANGUAGE TESTING SYSTEM) is
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of
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improving English.
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humans
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some students face fetal death .
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fewer because of
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in United State. The Seemingly Inexorable debate about going
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different countries can keep on going .
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their children to go
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for study and work
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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