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The maps belowshow an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan

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The figure beneath indicates a map that shows how an industrial area will be changed in the future. In summary, more roads are going to be added to the
square
 in the middle.
Second
, there will be another
square
 below the existing one, it is somehow a bit smaller.
Third
, a significant change will be adding more houses in the north and west of the area
next
 to the town.
last
 but not least, a few more places will be established,
such
 as a medical centre, and shops close to the bigger
square
, and
also
, a playground and a school in the east. 
In contrast
, despite placing some more facilities, two of the housing in the east will be destroyed.  Overall, as
it
Correct pronoun usage
apply
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can be clearly seen, many more buildings like shops, a playground, a school, and a smaller
square
 will be built, but some housing will be destroyed.
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