Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In your letter - Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. - Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. - Request a reduction in your bill.

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Dear

internet

provider, I am writing

this

letter with great dissatisfaction regarding

internet

service which is provided you. My name is Misbaha and I have been using your net service since 2021. Needless to say, it is an amazing experience

however

from

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the

last

week I am facing

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an issue

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issue

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issues

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in terms of speed. Earlier, I thought that might be

wire

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a wire

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problem so I brought a new wire and fixed it. Despite, changing the wire no result came out. If, possible can you arrange a technician who can visit

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my house so that, he can find the nature of the problem and can rectify

instantly

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it instantly

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It’s not only hampering my work but

also

I am not able to connect with my family and friends. Even though I brought

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temporary

internet

data yet I really want that you

have

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to fix the line as matter of urgency. Apart from that, I have not been able to use the

internet

from

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since

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last

week

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therefore

I request

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you

that

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make some concession in my monthly bill. A prompt response is highly commendable. I am looking forward to

hear

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from your side. Yours truly misbaha

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

193 words

4.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In your letter - Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. - Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. - Request a reduction in your bill.

The Closing

Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teenagers should have regular exams at secondary school as this will prepare them better for life after leaving school. Do you agree or disagree?

The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. to what extent do you agree?

Worker often have to retire at the age of 60 or 65. However, some people say that they should be allowed to continue working for as long as they want. What is your opinion about this?