Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In your letter - Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. - Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. - Request a reduction in your bill.

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Dear

internet

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provider, I am writing

this

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letter with great dissatisfaction regarding

internet

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service which is provided you. My name is Misbaha and I have been using your net service since 2021. Needless to say, it is an amazing experience

however

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from

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for

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the

last

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week I am facing

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an issue

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issue

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in terms of speed. Earlier, I thought that might be

wire

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a wire

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problem so I brought a new wire and fixed it. Despite, changing the wire no result came out. If, possible can you arrange a technician who can visit

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apply

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my house so that, he can find the nature of the problem and can rectify

instantly

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it instantly

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It’s not only hampering my work but

also

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I am not able to connect with my family and friends. Even though I brought

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apply

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temporary

internet

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data yet I really want that you

have

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to fix the line as matter of urgency. Apart from that, I have not been able to use the

internet

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from

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since

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last

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week

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therefore

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I request

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you

that

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apply

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make some concession in my monthly bill. A prompt response is highly commendable. I am looking forward to

hear

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from your side. Yours truly misbaha

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

193 words

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Write a letter to your internet service provider to complain. In your letter - Describe the problem and why you are unhappy. - Arrange for an engineer to visit your home. - Request a reduction in your bill.

The Closing

Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older.

Some people believe that children should be allowed to go out for outdoor activities. While others believe that children should stay at home most of the time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teacher in the classroom.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.