Mrs Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barrett. In your letter: • suggest how you could help her in her home • say why you would like to do this work • explain when you will and will not be available

Dear Mre
Barrrett
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, I just saw your ad looking for someone to help you
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home
chures
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chores
cures
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for a few hours a day
next
summer
,
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since you are an English teacher we could
ended
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up with a good deal because I am looking to improve my English, so
instead
of paying me cash
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the end of each day working we could have
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English session to improve my writing.
First
of all, I consider
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as
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a good sheaf, I had some experience working in a local restaurant, so I could help you with preparing food and cleaning
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kitchen
kitchens
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the kithchen
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kithchen
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I am
animal
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lover so I you have a dog or a cat I could
walking
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them and train them. I like to
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work with you
next
summer
,
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because I productive
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persone
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and I like to help other people and I find
my self
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more productive. Regarde my
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avialabilty
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summer I could be available all the time 24/7 I hope
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you back Yours faithfully
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Butte
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  • Cultural immersion
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