Some people argue that in the future, teachers will be displaced by the growth of computers. How far do you agree or disagree?

Throughout centuries,

education

has been one of the most critical

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for all nations. It

also

has changed in terms of methods ,which react to our society with technological tools that really affect our systems. Whatever

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devices are effectively important for

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world, teaching is a complex and specific matter which becomes

teachers

as important as technology. I strongly support that

teachers

have to be in the

education

system permanently because they can approach pupils sociologically and psychologically.

Firstly

,

teachers

cannot only teach their

students

academic issues ,but

also

trainers teach them social skills.

For example

, when a pupil cannot solve their friendship trouble,

teachers

may notice the complication and

teachers

intervene in issues to make the pupil realize how she can solve the problem, and what kind of action is beneficial for her.

However

, a computer cannot deal the social obstacle because

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they

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not any emotional talent.

Moreover

, all

students

improve constantly aspect of physically, psychologically and mentally ,and while they are developing they have to adapt

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the

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that they have been

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Schools are places where they mostly spend their time ,and

students

face so many factors that affect their life;

besides

, they have to overcome all adaptation matters. They can ask help from only their trainers to deal with the problems due to only they know them ,and the problems may solve with some professional and personal activity that computers cannot do anything.

On the other hand

, technology

also

covers the significant value for our life because it makes life easier. It is

also

a necessity owing to how much tools support

students

, they as much as learn. A point in the case,

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a geography teacher wants to teach maps, if he uses an augmented reality device, the inputs that

students

learn will be more effective than a regular book.

Furthermore

, pupils reach so much information thanks to computers and the internet ,their wastage

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is decreasing and they can spare more time to develop their other abilities. To conclude,it is undeniable fact that computers are so significant tools to contribute many things

education

.

However

, it is obviously seen that

teachers

are the main stones of the

education

system in terms of

students

' social and psychological circumstances.