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Some people argue that in the future, teachers will be displaced by the growth of computers. How far do you agree or disagree?

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Throughout centuries,
education
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 has been one of the most critical
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 for all nations. It
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 has changed in terms of methods ,which react to our society with technological tools that really affect our systems. Whatever
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devices are effectively important for
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 world, teaching is a complex and specific matter which becomes
teachers
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 as important as technology. I strongly support that
teachers
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 have to be in the
education
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 system permanently because they can approach pupils sociologically and psychologically.
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,
teachers
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 cannot only teach their
students
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 academic issues ,but
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 trainers teach them social skills.
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, when a pupil cannot solve their friendship trouble,
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 may notice the complication and
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 intervene in issues to make the pupil realize how she can solve the problem, and what kind of action is beneficial for her.
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, a computer cannot deal the social obstacle because
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they
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 not any emotional talent.
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, all
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 improve constantly aspect of physically, psychologically and mentally ,and while they are developing they have to adapt
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 the
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 that they have been
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 Schools are places where they mostly spend their time ,and
students
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 face so many factors that affect their life;
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, they have to overcome all adaptation matters. They can ask help from only their trainers to deal with the problems due to only they know them ,and the problems may solve with some professional and personal activity that computers cannot do anything.
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, technology
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 covers the significant value for our life because it makes life easier. It is
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 a necessity owing to how much tools support
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, they as much as learn. A point in the case,
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 a geography teacher wants to teach maps, if he uses an augmented reality device, the inputs that
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 learn will be more effective than a regular book.
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, pupils reach so much information thanks to computers and the internet ,their wastage
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 is decreasing and they can spare more time to develop their other abilities. To conclude,it is undeniable fact that computers are so significant tools to contribute many things
education
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.
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, it is obviously seen that
teachers
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 are the main stones of the
education
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 system in terms of
students
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' social and psychological circumstances.
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