Some people believe women are better leaders than men. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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some
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's points of view,
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are better
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than
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. These days, there are more and more
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supervisors in
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or in
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field.
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up compares to
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. In my opinions, I agree in some parts that
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better
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than man,
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, in some
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departments
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departments
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hospital, it is obvious to see that most of the nurses are female, and
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can always find a way to communicate with
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especially when they have to face some arguments between patients and colleagues. Female has more sense of empathy which make them understand the
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emotions
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emotions
and difficulties of others.
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,
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to be calm so they do not understand why
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can not follow the process
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people
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have difficulties.
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, some parts of
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also
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have the sense of being calm and work in order easily like
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. In general,
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in the past tend to have
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be
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not only because of
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personality and
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abilities
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abilities
but
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because
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aurolity
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quality
of gender. In the sociality of
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males
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which is
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on
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who can decide everything for families,
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nowadays, the
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conscious
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female
fame
family
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families
has grown. There are more and more
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who work on
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education to educate to have
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equal
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quality
in the world. In conclusion, I believe that
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better
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than
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because they are more empathic and can wear in other's shoes to solve problems
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precisely
proactively
,
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even though
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can spend less time and achieve goals easily, they can not have
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soft heart to understand
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who work with them and make them feel grateful and motivate them to improve
theirselves
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themselves
.
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