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You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.

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Hello, myself is
jignesh
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Jignesh
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 jariwala,
UVCs
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UVC
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 in surat, had attended one
my
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of my
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 company's
meeting
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meetings
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 in your
hotel
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before
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for
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 10
day
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days
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 i.e., 21-11-2022.
I
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It
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 was really a good stay at your
hotel
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 and very nice atmosphere, beautiful look, good service and delicious food. I enjoyed
a
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it a
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lot and
comfortable
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was comfortable
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 during my stay in your
hotel
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. I am writing
this
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 letter because
i
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I
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 believed that
i
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I
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 have left
my
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apply
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some important paper card folder including my original PAN card copy, Driving licence and aadhar card in your
hotel
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. my room no. was 302
at
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on
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3rd
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the 3rd
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 floor. It is very much important
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Documents
Documens
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Documents
 which are essential everywhere and I am going to take an
educational
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education
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 loan for my son. I hereby request you to check the same in the room and if you will find
then
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 request you to courier the same
on
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to
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 my below address. I will pay courier
harge
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charge
charges
 to you. Thanks well in advance for your help and
oblidge
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oblige
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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