Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
People
from different age groups have been showing an inclination toward using social networking sites while this
kind of communication causes many dangers. While using social media
can cause in being exposed to inappropriate content, it can be useful if used carefully.
The advantage of this
issue is that since the invention of social media
, many people
have been better able to connect with each other and also
to keep up to date with the lives of their friends, families, co-workers and even celebrities, to
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such
a degree which was previously impossible. Besides
, people
will be given the chance to post things on social media
and find better job opportunities or even like-minded people
online. For example
, I once contacted a girl on face book
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facebook
as
I am and we have been in touch ever since.
To talk about its advantage, it can be said that as Correct word choice
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people
of all ages have access to social media
, children
can be exposed to adult content, and are themselves vulnerable to be
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children
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media
, social media's
issues are not completely eliminated. Change noun form
media
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,
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media
between children
and schoolchildren. However
, I believe that if it is used under the supervision of parents, it would be less likely to cause problems for children
and it can be very much efficient for them, instead
.
In conclusion, as long as people
are aware of the risks of using social media
, and are careful to post only respectful and respectable content, then
the advantages of social media
far outweigh the disadvantages, and children
and adults alike should be allowed to benefit from such
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