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People today shop, work and communicate with others via the Internet instead of face-to-face communication. Is it a positive or negative development?

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 has become more and more popular all over the world for a long
time
. There are both pros and cons for
people
 to communicate with each other online. My view is that using
internet
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 to communicate with other
people
 has more benefits overall.
Firstly
, it is obvious that the public
are
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 getting closer to each other than before after using
internet
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.
This
 is because
people
 used to communicate with their friends who were living
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oversea by
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written
writing
writen
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 letters and
sometime
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sometimes
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 it took over 2 months to
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deliver
delivered
delived
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deliver
 them. After using
internet
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,
people
 can
talked
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 with their friends at any
times
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time
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 and any
places
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place
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 all over the world.
Moreover
,
people
 can save a
lot
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time
 by using the
internet
.
For example
, some university
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students
studnets
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students
 may spend 1 hour
to go
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 to
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school
shcool
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school
 every day, now they can take classes online and save them 1 hour on the way to school. So that they have extra 1 hour every day to do what they are interested in.
That is
 not to say that using
internet
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 to
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communicate
commucatie
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communicate
 with
people
 has no disadvantages. There is a sign that more and more adults are relying on
internet
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 for their daily life
such
 as online shopping, playing
game
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games
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, watching
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movies
moives
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movies
 and so on
instead
 of going out for social. But it is still a small number of
people
. In summary, it is a great thing for
people
 to shop, work and communicate online because
internet
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 can help
people
 to communicate with each other easier and
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 everyone’s
time
. Meanwhile, the
pubic
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public
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 may reduce their social
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behaviour
behavier
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behaviour
 face-to-face due to
internet
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the internet
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.
Therefore
,
people
 should try to adjust how much
time
 they gonna spend online
everyday
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.
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