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Some working parents believe children centres can provide the best care for children, while others think that other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about whether
parents
 should send their
children
 to
child
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childcare
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care
 centres.
However
, some young
parents
 think that
kids
 can get better
care
 from
children
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children's
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 centres while other people think that the older generation families can take
care
 of the young
kids
 well too. My view is that
child
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childcare
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care
 should be the best option for working
parents
.
First
, it is obvious that
children
 can get a
lot
 of friends in
child
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childcare
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care
 centres.
This
 is because most of the
kids
 are of a similar age and the centre usually has enough space for the
kids
 to play with each other every day. So that
child
care
 can provide
kids
 with a good environment to make friends with each other.
Moreover
, the teachers who are working at the
child
care
 centre should have a certificate of education.
For example
, they can teach the students a
lot
 of knowledge which is good for their ages,
such
 as painting, singing, dancing and so on.
Therefore
,
the
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young
kids
 can learn a
lot
 of skills from them.
That is
 not to say that grandparents cannot do the same job as teachers at the
child
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child's
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 school. Of course, the grandparents only need to take
care
 of 1 or 2
kids
 at the same time, so that they can spend more time with the
kids
 and take
care
 of the
kids
 more carefully while the teacher may be taking
care
 of 7 to 8
children
 at the same time. But the grandparents may not have enough knowledge to teach their
kids
. In summary, it is a good idea for working
parents
 to send their
kids
 to
child
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childcare
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care
 because their
kids
 can have more friends and learn a
lot
 of skills.
Meanwhile
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 the grandfather or grandmother can take
care
 of their grandsons or granddaughters more carefully.
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