Some working parents believe children centres can provide the best care for children, while others think that other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about whether

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should send their

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centres.

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, some young

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think that

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can get better

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centres while other people think that the older generation families can take

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of the young

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well too. My view is that

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should be the best option for working

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, it is obvious that

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can get a

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of friends in

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centres.

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is because most of the

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are of a similar age and the centre usually has enough space for the

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to play with each other every day. So that

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can provide

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with a good environment to make friends with each other.

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, the teachers who are working at the

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centre should have a certificate of education.

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, they can teach the students a

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of knowledge which is good for their ages,

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as painting, singing, dancing and so on.

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young

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can learn a

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of skills from them.

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not to say that grandparents cannot do the same job as teachers at the

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school. Of course, the grandparents only need to take

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of 1 or 2

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at the same time, so that they can spend more time with the

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and take

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of the

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more carefully while the teacher may be taking

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of 7 to 8

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at the same time. But the grandparents may not have enough knowledge to teach their

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. In summary, it is a good idea for working

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to send their

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to

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because their

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can have more friends and learn a

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of skills.

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the grandfather or grandmother can take

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of their grandsons or granddaughters more carefully.