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Harmful impact of violence in computer games , tv, movies and other activities on children . How harmful is the violence for the children. How do you solve the problem

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Nowadays, electronic
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 become popular, and the phenomenon of some
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 having a negative influence on children has aroused wide concern among various circles. In view of
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 alarming situation, both governments and individuals have a duty to find ways to overcome these problems. Regarding the causes of the negative influence of playing electronic
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, the screen of virtual
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 is extremely similar to reality even more these days. It is similar enough to lead players to mix with the real world especially when
people
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 spend too much time playing video
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.
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, some
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 may use violence and crime to attract
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 to play because, in the game, everything is legal. Players can actually try to rob a bank without any consequence.
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 type of game will affect children's views about the real world. More and More violence occurring in school is proof of
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. There are serval actions that could be taken to solve the problems described above. Governments should enforce strict policies for ranking the violence level of the
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 and limits the
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 who are able to buy them.
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, those
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 that allow killing
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 should be marked to level 3, and level 3 only allows
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 who are above 18 can buy.
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, parents should constrain their children from playing electronic entertainment.
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, set a time limit for their child to play
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 every day which should be able to get the balance between playing and studying. Under
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 line of thinking, electronic entertainment can bring us an amazing experience, but not without negative impacts.
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, with the right action by individuals and governments, it can be alleviate the problem.
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