There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir/ Madam I am writing
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letter to bring your kind attention to the
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service problem which was arriving late at the
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stop in my area and we have been facing
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issue for the
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two weeks.
To begin
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with, as buses rarely come on time, commuters are suffering so many problems.
Firstly
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, students are unable to reach school on time and they missed their
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teaching class.
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, workers, who use busy service regularly, are late for work and all sorts of scheduled tasks have gone wrong and we even missed important meetings on some days.
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, we are unable to pre-arrange for anything, as we cannot rely on the time when the
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will arrive. I think authorities should take action to solve
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issue as soon as possible. I would like to suggest that the
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numbers should be increased and proper action should be taken against a driver who comes late.
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, passengers’ feedback should be introduced and reviewed by the
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company to get the actual circumstances of the service. I am looking forward to getting your input on
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issue. Yours faithfully Sandar Myint
Submitted by sandarmyint740 on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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