information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables illustrate data about average temperatures and the duration of the light day in two cities. Looking from an overall perspective, we can make a conclusion that in comparison to
London
,
Sydney
had warmer weather and
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longer periods between sunrise and sunset. To start with temperature, during the time of investigation when in
London
maximum was 13 degrees Celsius and the minimum was 3 degrees Celsius,
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and in
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Sydney
there were 31 and 17 degrees Celsius respectively. Switching to the
next
category of
this
research the duration of light day, we see that on average it lasted 8 hours in
London
and approximately 14 hours in
Sydney
. While the collection of the information was produced between 28th to 30th of December, the time of sunrise and sunset in both cities hadn't had significant changes. The tables illustrate that in
London
time of sunrise was around 8 a.
m
. and sunset at around 4 p.
m
., and when we are looking at the information about
Sydney
sun
arose
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at around 6 a.
m
. and the light day finished at around 8 p.
m
.
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